All Comments on 'Feathers'

I give it a five for good writing and originality.

The description of Fabien's transformation is excellent. It works well how he teases Sam slowly showing off new parts of his body. A+ for originality. The oddness of the story kept me emotionally disconnected for much of the story. I liked Sam's recurring them of wondering if his Fabien, his lover was still inside. That worked well for me.