by MissSkye
I normally don't care for fetish stories...the feeder/expansion type fetish is not my thing.
However...this works! I love the rich, colorful picture you've painted when you describe the characters and food. I (of course) love a good lesbian story. You seem to enjoy setting this up for a lot more obesity related fun, and I like how it is apparent that you also like the characters in your story as well. Some people who tackle this genre seem to be more interested in generating disgust/contempt rather than celebrating others' enjoyment of something that might not be for them.