by pantera66
Thanks for the feedback, guys! I will try to get the next (last!) installment in before the end of the month, but no promises... I am almost sure I know HOW it's gonna end up now, though, so it's just a matter of having enough time! :)
Interested to see how this concludes. Very sensually erotic writing.
I love it I would like to know when you are going to right more.
God never cum so hard as when reading this series....can't wait for next chapter!
... life just gets in the way! haha My hope is to finish this up this week, please stay tuned. And again, thanks so much for the feedback! :D
I'm loving this story and can't wait to see how it ends.
This chapter had one minor glitch. When Victor called, Dad "...rolled me on top of him. His gaze was calm and steady as his hands worked on unbuckling his belt, opening his slacks, and pushing them, together with his boxers, down his hips, freeing his beautiful and hard cock." How why would he pull her on top and THEN begin to open and lower his pants? Other than that and maybe a typo or two, the rest of this chapter is great.
you two are perfect for each other hope your going to give him a baby and love the submissiveness in you for your daddy i just wish it never ends
My Daddy fantasy is totally in sync with this story. It is exactly what I wish had happened with my father who is now diseased. He never touched me but if he had, being milked and fucked by him as in this story is exactly what I would have wanted. Hot, wicked, loving, obsession, "rape", lactation, incest, taboo, transgression: it's all there. What happened to the next chapter?
I found this story series recently and am very excited for more
The FINAL chapter has been submitted... Hopefully I made no egregious errors and it will be posted soon!
you get when you are in love and lust together. Getting fucked by your daddy with his big hard cock and the passion he has makes you want to scream and thrust your pussy into him to give him the same great love and lustful feeling you are getting. And then when he cums and you feel it filling our love tunnel it's heaven!!!
Very well written! Thank you for writing out the hubby and giving these two a HEA!