All Comments on 'Feels So Close'

You should continue this story.

This story was awesome.. Please do write another chapter

This was very sweet. I hope there's more coming.

My favorite part of this story is Brooke's being seduced without her realizing it. This is an experience I myself can relate to. I can also relate somewhat to Brooke's feelings during the mall conversation with her believing she had made a fool of herself when, in reality, her message had come through loudly and clearly to her friend. Cute character, that Brooke.

The description of the activity during the massage was a real turn-on for me with the slow, steady progress by Fiona.

Fiona LaFi, you surely know how to create atmosphere, drawing the reader into the process you are describing, Whether or not you continue this story, I look forward to reading your next submission.

she seemed to scared to admit how she really feels about her friend, I do hope there is more to come

Very yummy indeed! I hope there's more to come! Thank you!

This is a fair little story, tense and intriguing at the start and it has plenty of potential. And yet somehow as it stands it feels incomplete---are you perhaps planning to take the story further in additional chapters?

Smokin' hot!

U gotta finish this one 4 real

Keep going with this. Has much potential.

God I hope you come back soon.