All Comments on 'Felicia's Rules'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow!

This was very sexy...not what I expected at first...didn't know where it was going..Cool! Liked it!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fantastic!

Wonderful! Would love to read more.

spoiled_bratschespoiled_bratscheover 14 years ago
Great!

An extremely well-written story which I enjoyed very much. Hope to see more from you in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Masturbation

I couldn't let go of my prick as I read your story. It kept me reading quickly untill the very end. I hope that this is just the beginning f new thrils for the two of you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice premise.

But the sex scene is too rushed.

Needed to slow down.

Needed to have dialog about how their masturbation felt.

What they were thinking about while they were masturbating.

And she denied that this was Felicia's idea, but she said they were playing by Felicia's rules. Contradictory.

Four stars.

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