All Comments on 'Felicity Ch. 14'

Helen and Inga? Helen and Jana? Just who were the two recent grads who went to the club at the beginning?

Interesting premise, though a lot of it felt hurried. Punctuation problems made it difficult to read. Some parts were too detailed and then sexual parts were skipped over. Literotica has a volunteer editor program - using an editor would make your writing more accessible to readers.

Always wondered how they got together, good read