All Comments on 'Fem School'

by bobellen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I really enjoyed this story...

I hope you will continue...you have an interesting way of telling a story...

DeborahTheDebutanteDeborahTheDebutanteover 10 years ago
:-)

I loved it too. Oh for a fem school. Siiiiigggghhh. Gorgeous.

bluesky496bluesky496over 10 years ago

i love this story , i want to go to fem school too .

crazycatzcrazycatzover 10 years ago

I wish you will keep the story going a little bit longer.Well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Michelle gets Tina but loses her husband Tim.

I think that the wife went over board with her husband sending him to the school. They had a loving relationship but he wanted to explore his feminine side at times to find out what a woman felt like and may be understand his wife better. But not to be subjected to what he had done to him at the school. To have a chastity device, turned into a slave or sex toy for his wife and may be put on hormones is too much. That is not what he was looking for. He will probably never be the same loving husband. What will you have the wife do next? Have her find a new guy to screw her or her feminized husband?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
leann5red

just love the holl transformation but I donote like watter sports the rest was fab is his wife going to give him hormones pls write more ty leann mawh xxx

SissyTanya69SissyTanya69over 9 years ago

I would love this to happen to me

v22omkv22omkalmost 2 years ago

Not sure why i even read this story...a bisexual woman...but somehow i chanced onto it and...oh my god....the slow, steady erosion of Tina's manhood...the careful destruction of the carefully constructed persona he had lived all his life...was incredibly erotic! And the casual way at the end... about the lock, and the hormones.. "I need to think about when that will happen, or not. I will also be thinking about the hormones you mentioned. My Tina might benefit from that." Such a clear transfer of complete power from Tina to Ms. Pat.... any sub could understand and get wet from that!

v22omkv22omkalmost 2 years ago

i continued to think about this story...and the transfer of power...it's clear that MIss Pat needs to take a male lover and then train Tina to suck cock...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nope. Missed the mark when you changed it into a non-con/pegging thing. Note that he can remove the cage at any time without the key (it's a toy) and the cage was another wasted bit that had nothing to do with crossdressing. When he learns that he can't trust his wife, that's an instant divorce. And after what happens in the school, signature or not, the civil lawsuit would have closed the school, put them in jail and made him a wealthy man. Good start, horrible ending ruined the story. 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Chapter 2?

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle10 months ago

Couldn't stop reading. I hope you finish her journey and let us know where you want her to go. I wish I was in her place and my wife would accept me to transition. I need to become the woman I always should have been

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