by mywifesslave
Many shortcomings in the plot. But still, the writer has potential. Overall it was a good one.
Lately all the stories that have people from India involved make those people out to be wildly unlikeable characters doing crazy things, spouting inane dialogue. This was no different. With no one to like, this wasn't interesting or fun to read. *1* star.
I really liked it, the cruel wife slowly humiliating him before taking control.
It was really good till the mid story, when things were going slowly. Then everything went too fast. You could have make it like 5 chapters to bring on the climax of their marriage, and make it a very good story.
Anyways, rated it 5, as some morons are rating it 1.
Enjoyed the dominance of Parvati... I hope I marry a similar woman like her...
Please write the next chapter...
Encountered powerful white women, very strong black women and aggressive Chinese women but never a particularly forceful Indian women. Wow, this would be a treat! Thanks for sharing.
Many flows in the story. Story not contented within sexual act it self.
Still good to read such material which is rare here.
Even after years the story didn't take a leap.