All Comments on 'Female Led Household Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Many shortcomings in the plot. But still, the writer has potential. Overall it was a good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow!

Rude and racial commenter! I liked your story. Hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What is going on here?

Lately all the stories that have people from India involved make those people out to be wildly unlikeable characters doing crazy things, spouting inane dialogue. This was no different. With no one to like, this wasn't interesting or fun to read. *1* star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I really liked it, the cruel wife slowly humiliating him before taking control.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good, but problem with pace.

It was really good till the mid story, when things were going slowly. Then everything went too fast. You could have make it like 5 chapters to bring on the climax of their marriage, and make it a very good story.

Anyways, rated it 5, as some morons are rating it 1.

angelus288angelus288over 8 years ago

Like the story, I hope to see more.

CFNM999CFNM999about 8 years ago
suuper ..

very good .. write more ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please write more

This is fantastic start. please write more. pleae..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
excellent story

PLEASE POST MORE SIMILAR STORIES

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved it

Enjoyed the dominance of Parvati... I hope I marry a similar woman like her...

Please write the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow!

Encountered powerful white women, very strong black women and aggressive Chinese women but never a particularly forceful Indian women. Wow, this would be a treat! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Many flows in the story. Story not contented within sexual act it self.

Still good to read such material which is rare here.

Even after years the story didn't take a leap.

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