by kianareeves
but not nearly as good as 326. I think just changing and introducing a lot more 3xx persons does the story no good. or at least introducing a lot more will just be a reptetition. I would have rather liked to see the developpment of one than a repetition of the same with 2 more.
Another hit! Thank you! Very very hot. Seriously who does not think about how hot it would be to climax in a public location. Thank you for part two. :)
Do they have these type of studies for guys?! Definitely interesting hearing other's experiences, but I would like to see a return to 326 as well.
Dear god! Yet again, you fill me with bliss - then you take all away! Wonderfully done sequel to the first, kiana. -Craig
I've read a lot of stories on literotica, and your "subject" series blows them all away. Thank you for writing these.
I'm amazed that some of the commenters can find anything wrong with this story. Yes, it's similar to the first one, but that's kind of the point. It's also different enough to be even more exciting. These stories make me wish I were one of these girls, it is unbearably sexy to think about coming in public like that.
I'm really mad at myself now. I've read both 326 and 334 when I couldn't get off ><" (I'm at work, but I don't have to work). And damn, i can't wait to get home. I'm soooo fucking wet! I am glad there's a few more of these... they will be useful tonight.
Very hot.. I want more!!!!
I'm kinda liking the hopes of her and Kinsey doing it together at the end.
You've written another really hot story. Another one that made me go "God I wish that was me!" I especially loved how the device completely broke her, taking her from a woman full of self control and proud of it to an unashamed, liberated, sex craving girl. I look forward to reading the other two. I for one agree it was a better choice to write multiple characters in a similar but not the same situation as opposed to one character "having all the fun." You paired your characters with the situations they are presented and you did it well and that's a lot of what makes this an awesome set of stories.
Wow. I love your writing technique, and how this story wasn't all erotica, but plot. A nice change, for sure.
Love this story so much! Its one of the best I have read about orgasm deprivition. I also loved your previous one, and look forward to reading the next one! Awesome plot, great charectors and just wow... sexy.
Apart from enjoying it generally, I liked the exploration of different characters in this series. I remember in particular that the style felt different between this story and the previous as is written by a different person.
Keep on the good work!
I love reading your stories.
This was somehow hotter than the others. For some reason, more spicy and tantalizing. Perhaps her reluctance urged ME higher. IDK, but it was the best, yet. Of any of them. Thank you, please? Continue, just one more??
The detail! It is incredibly detailed and the orgasms are so beautifully decribed. Keep on writing. 5 out of 5.
Wow!!!!!! This DOES keep getting better and better!!!! OMGgggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!
stuff for sure. I can imagine one for guys with nipple suction, cock suction, anal fucking and ball massage and after finally getting to an orgasm, starting over, and over, something that can be painful for most guys after cumming and "Kelly" would not care!
Well done! I can't help but picture two of my college girlfriends as subjects of this study and I can't get the images out of my mind.
One thing though; I would hate to be the next boyfriend of any of these girls. It seems like, no matter how good you are, you would have trouble competing with these devices.
Well, still the hottest story line I have had the pleasure of reading. I know it has been a long time since the story has been published but it still carries a lot of creative and imaginative writing. As another commenter mentioned, I would hate to be a boyfriend of one of these lab rats. There would be no way of being able to make one of these women cum as long or as hard as these devices. Imagine being fitted with one of these and then subjected to an intense interrogation? I would probably confess anything to be let out of the device. Too bad none of the girls have passed out so far.
Well it's been great. I've been edging all the time spent reading it, even not touching me