by pluggedforlife
Quite an arsenal you've got going! (He-he, got a new word for my own stash.) Can't help but feel sorry for the boy; a bit. Will he realize the background to the role he now plays to ensure the future of the homo-sapien? Will he accept it or will he try screech about it? Will he apologize for having angry thoughts about his aunt? Ooooh, will he find luv?
Loving this story.
Evebroughtanaxthistime
Too short these two chapters. I'm not able to comment. The story promises but ... will we see it ?
At that point he stomped them both and left for good. Seriously bad.
Alex had hit such a low point that a surge of Energy rushed through his body. He suddenly leaped up with muscles bulging and ran out the door. He pushed his aunt aside until she hit the floor. He knocked every woman unconscious so bad that he caused them brain damage. He was able to make his way out of the prison but sought to return to free the others.
I'm very interested in seeing where this goes, do you plan on continuing the story?
amazing premise with really good writing. some of the best ive seen. this NEEDS to be continued. -latinmaleny1986