by sadbluekid
Very sorry to say that I lost interest in Part 2. It just read like a laundry list. First I did this, then she did that. Each to their own I guess but there's nothing there for me. No real love or respect, just a woman using a man for her pleasure in such a clinical, uncaring way. Actually, put that way, it does sound more like real life.
Just found this. Writing was good but ending seemed premature. Another chapter would have helped.