All Comments on 'Feminine Allure Pt. 12-13'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

This story is so erotic, dramatic and romantic. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What a ride

I didn’t want to comment til the end since I couldn’t stop and didn’t want to stop enjoying all of this. What an incredibly emotional roller coaster ride that was.

These are the kind of stories I live for but sadly they are few and far between aside from a couple of remarkably talented authors. Thank you so much.

mechan11mechan11almost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed it all the way through, and I hope you can find more you like like this, from me or others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

<sigh> definitely a fantasy romance one could only dream of having

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's like 1 of those movies where you're sure the love interest is actually a spy planted to undermine the main character only to find there's a twist! Very well executed writing.

Sorry won't spoil it for future readers ;-)

Satyam4005Satyam400510 months ago

Woooow , just wow , i was a lot disappointed till thr last chapter but this chapter sorted all out . And I found out why it was tagged as romance because it really was one of the best romance story ever for me . Thanks me chan for this awesome content ♥️

Satyam4005Satyam400510 months ago

Man , I re-read this series more than 4 times since yesterday and still not get bored by even the slightest. Again thanks a lot mechan

Satyam4005Satyam400510 months ago

Well. Now I got it she was at miss skeptic house all along in San Francisco but the thing I didn't get that why did she go to meet the mc ? , I mean she said she unethically hypnotised him ( which I wouldn't mind as she was his wife ofcourse) to get the marriage off him so i wanna ask what does this mean ? I mean does this mean that she wanted just let him go away his stress about marriage and rethink about it or just completely Manipulate him to think like he shouldn't care about his marriage ever again ?

mechan11mechan1110 months agoAuthor

Hey Satyam, thank you for all the feedback on this story. I didn't fully have the ending in-mind from the start, but her manipulation of him was a bit of selfishness on her part, taking him because she wanted him in that way, experiencing a little of her dominant side and his willingness to submit. What turned into a planned, one-time engagement became another, and then another, and so on; really neither wanted it to end.

Before it started, she'd planned to see how he would genuinely feel if the marriage dissolved, if he would be happy, sad, relieved, whatever; what they got was a bit of a rekindling. She could have made it so he could never leave her, but that wasn't what she wanted.

Satyam4005Satyam40059 months ago

Ok , thanks for replying me me-chan . I got it now even the answers of those questions which I didn't ask but had in my mind . She wanted to know how he'd react after their marriage would be broken , because she didn't want him to make him be with her if he doesn't want to but when she entranced him , she found him aroused and willing to submit so she played a little game , thought to end it after the night but ended up continuing it and finally she got that he never wanted to end the marriage subconsciously but just way more focused towards his employment and they both ended up together in a loving cute relationship. Hope we'll get something like that again. I mean it doesn't matter whether you had precisely this ending in your mind or not but the thing I know that you wanted it to end in a romantic way already , as you tagged it as romance so I just want a romantic- mind control-Femdom story with mechan's unique flavour on it .

UzumakiNaruto9999UzumakiNaruto99997 months ago

This series was simply amazing just like a dream in first half, playfulness in mid and wonderful coming back to reality even sweeter than dream. How I wonder I can trade places with mc or atleast experience something similar, how I am willing to give up my pitiful life and soul to my wife for that.

Thanks a lot again for this amazing story 🥰😭

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