by HeyAll
5 stars. My only criticism is a matter of diction: "throws of orgasm" should be "throes" of orgasm.
A lovely short story, with an interesting premise which was we developed for the format. Short stories are their own artform - O. Henry wrote some classics which have stood the test of time.
Something different from my usual read on Literotica! BTB mostly! Full marks 5 - Stars!
Very nice story but you should have continued with more of this and see how their love continued and her getting pregnant with several more children!!!!!!!!! 5 stars!!!!!!!!!
Nagyon tetszett, kár, hogy nincs folytatása, mert érzelmes szexuális kielégülést lehetett volna megírni anya és fia között, mert egy ilyen kapcsolat nem egyszeri élvezést jelent.
Wow - even though it was a short story - it was hot - totally loved it - you should write more of this.
My mom and read this together,she got wet as hell and me hard as fuck,she felt so good when she sat on my hard cock
That was HHHHHOOOOOOOTTTT!!! Loved it. Very interesting and great build up.
(12/21/2021) This was a great short story, nicely done; an enjoyable read. I have no negative critique at all. Five stars from me.
What part of Chile is the temple of fertility? I want to take my mother to discover this new tourist destination.
A great story well worth 5-Stars. Incest stories are not my favorite type of stories with Erotic Horror. Nonhuman, And sci-Fi in that order. The only incest stories I like are like your with a supernatural or alien component in them. It adds so much more to a routine incest story. An excellent plot with excellent character development. Ward Master 91D70
I gave this story 5 stars only because the site doesn't give a option for 6!
Please keep up the great work!The story was absolutely erotic!
Fantastic story. Love the mom son sex and lactation. I have sucked my moms boobs but no milk. Wish I had got milk from them. Keep writing 😘
A very erotic story. Not sure why, but reading this story was such a turn on for me. The image of his mom coming into the bedroom and then sitting down on his cock was almost too much for me. Thanks for a great story.
please write part 2 of this! amazing combo. mom-son incest, impregnating, breastfeeding. this is such a treat!
Loved it! Would love to read about their sex during her pregnancy and his intense breastfeeding post her pregnancy. Hope there is a sequel to this story!
You write wonderfully, and I hope more of your stories will feature impregnation in the future!
I want to read next chapter ... Very interesting story ...
At the bottom of page one, the mother mentions how the boy's father used to nurse at her breasts. This is a good touch, except that once "good old Dad" is mentioned he is dropped from the story. What happened to him? Did he die, is he in prison, did they divorce? More background information is needed, now that you brought him up.
How are Mom and son going to explain their new relationship to the neighbors and extended family?
So many questions, so few answers.
For a pretty short story it was really quite good. Oh and where do I find this temple?
Does begin with certain actions - great idea for a joining together
would think they would get someone from the university. to go to the temple to get her pregnant. to help live their new life together.
Love the Mother and Son stories, especially impregnation and lactation all in the mix. I hope you come back to this one and take us through a few children and the sexual adventures along the way.When Mom came into the bedroom and made her son hers was over the top. Kudos.
Loved it! Made me think of my mother. Thanks for your time and imagination.
The lead up was detailed enough and intriguing, the culmination of her true desires was fantastic, the short portion of the pregnancy and the future letf me wanting MORE!!! Great story, wouldn't mind seeing a part two for the second baby... thank you for publishing your writing here.
Loved it when she went into her son's room and took what she needed and gave him what he wanted.
Not sure exactly why, but this was one of the most erotic stories I've ever read.Something about it really struck a nerve in me! GREAT story!
I thourghly enjoyed this story ! I was able to invision this beautiful milf with great tits. The thought of her sons seed finding its way to her fertile egg was incredible. I had the opportunity to nurse on a woman once and the sex that followed was mind blowing so I could relate to that also. I hope that there are more stories to follow possibly with him impregnating an aunt or other older women.
I love what I have read so far, I ask that you continue this story. You have my attention from beginning to end, Once again, an awesome start to great story!
DMSI
With Mom bringing a Lady Friend from the office home and have Bobby tell her of the Temple. Then take her there just like mom. This one he can Marry w/o their names being the Same aka Smith whatever. Give him 2 Mommy's to Milk.
Interesting concept. I keep picturing 45-ish mom at work, nice dress bulging out from her pregnancy, no wedding ring and everyone wondering who knocked her up.
to that temple one at a time and have them touch it. Then fuck me as an animal!! Maybe you could write another story about a wife and a student of hers going to that temple.
Thanks for this, a fine voice good imagery and I hope you keep writing for these two people. The mother is great. Made me want this mother too.
While the mom and son were doing it, he should be drinking more of her milk straight from her tits. She tells him to slow down, don't swallow her milk and open his mouth. Then she drinks her own milk straight from her son's mouth!
And please write a sequel to this story, and your other incest ones!
Are you going to continue with the story with the son? And/or, will the story continue because Mom is under the spell and she needs to seek to remain fulfilled?!
5 stars for me. After touching the statue both mother and son have an insatiable desire to rutt like wild animals until the son grunts his words of love in his sweet mothers ear all while seeding his mothers womb. The thought of nursing from his mothers breasts while reentering mommy's pussy, helped make this story top notch for me. After breeding his mother and experiencing the most intense orgasm of his life the son will mount his mother at every opportunity. As for mom she too will feel the intensity of the incest orgasm and not only submit to her son's advances but will dress as sexy as possible to lure her son back between her thighs. Mommy will bear her son's babies until she becomes barren, how long and how many babies only the fertility gods know.
You take mom/son sex over the top. Please don't stop, stories like this are what make this site so great. as always .............................THANKS for the read.
Another of your excellent stories, and I can personally identify with parts of it.
Minnie
exactly how the lady in this story feels. I started lactating two weeks before my son was born, milk poured from me. Even breast feeding my baby three or more times a day didn't empty my breasts so first my boyfriend and later my dad fed from me as I detested breast pumps.
There was no feeling like it, before or since. Having a man rather than a baby suckling from me made me so wet and horny it was overwhelming, it got so intense I ended up fucking and feeding at the same time, even with my dad!
This story brings back memories of my late father and the Times we had together.
Thank you.
Five Stars! What an interesting twist to the mom-son fuck story. Loved it!
this is such a turn on for me. since the mom is a professional woman it would be nice if she was wearing pantyhose once in awhile even when she is pregnant and her son takes her through them.
Mom/son sex and moms lactating are two of my sexual hot buttons so I loved it! It would be great if they went back to the temple again after their first set of twins were born.
This is a novel story, not your ordinary mom-son incest. The setting is unusual a temple in Chile with a fertility statue. The sun shines, she touches the stature and her life changes forever. Well written story, the leads up to the sex scene was prolonged enough to add interest, and the female superior position was perfect for the story. The conclusion in the kitchen was anti-climatic but was exactly what was needed.
The climate in Chile is a dessert and there is almost no jungle. A minor issue for a great story.
I might cum while I re-read this. I'd like it to be longer, a part of a series where we really get to know these two and their new union. I feel like you're tapping into some very powerful Tantric Wicca here. I especially like the hairy pussy.
I can see at least 4 more chapters to this story , maybe more . I hope you are prepared to finish this saga . It will be a very satisfying saga judging by the 1st chap't .
I hope you will continue this story line.
I have dreamed about....
Maybe they can produce offspring with special powers of their own and make incest NOT a repugnant issue for all.
I DO hope they have repeat sessions.
HC
A very different but interesting story and adventure. Now, Bobby needs to bang his Mom hard from behind and do her every chance he gets, so she knows he's accepted this whole situation. Of course, his Mom needs to let go and screw him hard, scream, thrash and cum so hard she covers him in sticky / wet cum too. Hopefully, she can keep special powers from the temple visit and maybe have enhanced sexual abilities / powers. Cannot wait for more. Thank you.
Thanks so much! Now that Mommy has broken him in, maybe she'd like to sit on his face and feed him some hot cream pie, in addition to her warm milk.... ;-)
Your stories are always so great! I love reading them. This one is one of your best!
An unusual plot line, but it worked just fine. very horny story, I enjoyed it a lot.
Special thanks to delonch for the story concept.
Hope you've all enjoyed reading.
Heyall