All Comments on 'Festive Wrapping'

You've chosen a really tough format but, as usual, handled it impeccably and with a great deal of wry humor mixed in with the sex. I particularly enjoyed, "Perhaps that’s why she has tied me to her legs." Good luck in the contest!

I'd enjoy something like this, but I did. I think these little snippets give a pretty clear picture of who these characters are, which surprises me, given the brevity. Skillfully done, King Og. Good luck in the contest.

Ogg...this was such a surprise. Not my typical category, and you definitely went for a challenging format. But your little vignettes were concise, visual, and often hilarious. They were like some kind of psychedelic fetish haiku -- well done!

I particularly liked the one about the cracker.....you are just too funny.

Very sexy and funny at the same time.

but hate sprouts :)

There's English, and then there's English. Very well done, sir. The skill you put into choosing individual words is never more evident. Congrats.

Amazing. You are very talented. I loved the idea. Great.

that has given me some good ideas what to do at christmas for some naughty fun.

I'm going to have to steal this idea and try it myself some day.