All Comments on 'Fever Ch. 01'

Of course it mustn't be the end. Please, keep going with Ch 2, and stop being so defeatist. You've got a good thing going here, with plenty of potential. Freddy

please continue..

Please!!! you need to write more, I would love if you could make this into like a novel kind of thing with many more chapters. The plot, characters, and mood of the story of so much potential to develop! You're talented, so please keep writing.

I'm looking forward to see what happens to your heroine and if she can get over her fever and start one in her friend.

Lance

Loved it and want to know what happens next. Please Continue.

Looks like this could turn into something wonderful

really! can't wait for ch.2!

I have read many stories on this website but i have never left a comment until now. Your style of writing is truly inspiring. Great Job. Please continue i will be looking forward to it.

I enjoyed this story, can't wait to see what happens.

That was a great beginning! Can not wait for the next chapter of this story...you've left us in a bit of a cliffhanger here!

That was a great beginning! Can not wait for the next chapter of this story...you've left us in a bit of a cliffhanger here!

Please submit more of your "Fever" story, it deserves to be finished and enjoyed by others.

Please add more chapters to this story. I really want to know what happens next. :(

waiting for more

I remember reading this before. I just re-read it and I'm wondering why you never got around to finishing it. It's a great start and makes me want to know what happens next. I really hope you continue! :D

I really liked the first chapter and I would like to read more.

finish it

You need to write more it's amazing; please!!!

Please continue. I love all of your stories

i KNOW your not gunna leave it like this!

You've got to continue please I wanna know what happens

You are one of my favorite authors and I love your stories so pretty please with a cherry on top continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate you you never finish a story but i love the stories

I really love your writing because its so relatable and this story, god, my heart was fluttering the whole time. I mean I have a crush on another bi girl and she makes me feel this way.

Is there going to be a Fever CH. 02?

please continue this story!

I've been waiting to see what happens for years....pleeeeaaasseeee continue.

I really hope you continue with this story.

i want more!

Will there be a part 2?!

This was a really interesting story I was just wondering whether you plan on continuing it or not? Hope so I'd love to read more

Short, powerful, visceral.

Real.

What happened? You were still around writing for at least nine years after this story fragment!