All Comments on 'Fever Dream'

She looks down grabs the plate and throws it against the wall shattering it , you sorry bastard, first you do this shit without discussing it with me then you want to play dumb. I hope it was worth it because I have already called a lawyer, I hope it was worth it,

I liked it although I guess I must have missed the part where she threw a plate.

I didn't like it...Why? This wasn't fish nor meat, no matter if it was true or just a dream...2*

Did JR just wake up in the shower again? Dumb story.

Don't let alot of the comment get you down. Keep going, you'll get better. rated 3

forget about the asshole annony! he hates everything. He also blows and drinks his own cum!!

Yeah, right. You trash people for daring to have an opinion that's different from yours, and THEY'RE the ones filled with hate. Does the term hypocrite ring a bell?

Unless it's something like Alice dreaming of wonderland or Dorothy with the wizard. But they were children. A story of an adult having an erotic dream is difficult to make into a good story because it is such a common experience in real life. We have all probably had dreams that were more erotic than the story.

So, when the 'surprise ending' reveals that it was 'just a dream' it comes as a let-down.

Even so, I thought this was a reasonable attempt.

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Very good

Funny , Dallas like dream. She is a whore, or dreams shwmis.

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