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All Comments on 'Fiery, Fabulous Faye'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The end is an anticlimax

Faye a bitch and

Faye a bitch and Damon should run fast from the relationship.Swapping maybe something Faye have done before and have no second thought of doing-such a bad end to a clean story.For spoiling this I give you a 1=having thoughts of cheating..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
do not c it comming

I thought the story was fine until the end. Why do they have to swap. So munch for romance between 2 people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I thought it was an okay story until the end too. I don't think this one belongs in the "romance" section. There is nothing romantic about swapping partners, especially since they just met!

shmueltzvishmueltzviover 12 years ago
edit it

get rid of the last two lines!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

It was a great story UNTIL this 2. Why mess around especially when she told him she wants loyalty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Page 2, loyalty??????

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