All Comments on 'Fifty Shades Invades Michigan'

It's been to long, Guy. I hope Chris continues his travels and dominates different women. Can Fifty Shades invade Philly?

Well done!

I noticed a few typos. But the story was interesting. Looking forward to future installments!

Hmmm....imagine meeting a guy like that..YUM!

Apart from a few typos, your work was absolutely fantastic!

Ngggggghh...absolutely love it!!

I met a woman half my age who wanted a D/s experience and I gave it to her in spades. I'll be adding the story to my collection with the names changed.

xeema47

I appreciate your take on Fifty Shades of Grey!! And had lots of fun reading this...repeatedly until fruition came ;)

So he's scum.

To say that I'm going crazy just thinking of what all he will make me do. I am totally his! Our time together is so short. I willfully offer myself to him to please and pleasure him every way.

He is so in command of me. My hubby puts me on a elevation that doesn't allow my strong desire to be totally submissive! He inhibits my strong submissive cravings and desires..

My BLACK lover is powerful in his commands and expects no hesitation from me. Immediate response is expected!

Whenever I'm with him I am totally his! I so love it this way!

Orpheum69