by JadeRose05
I have been waiting sooooo long for this story to continue and I'm glad it has! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! Keep up the good work!
I would walk thru the gates of hell, for passion like that. Can't wait for the next installment.
Please don't keep us waiting. This story line is too good for a pause.
Okay I just have to say that this story is one of the best I have read in a long time. I didn't review any other chapters because I just foung this story today and I wanted to finish reading all the chapters available before reviewing. Anyway, I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
I love the electricity between Nic and Des and I can't wait to read the next installment. Great Job!
Great story! Characters are very realistic and plot flows.
Don't worry about people being impatient for the "good part". You've been giving us the good stuff since the beginning. I really appreciate the fact that you're taking the time to develop the story and the characters, all the while including passion!!
It's called story development which you are doing at the right pace. Can't wait for the dinner date when their desires will be known.
Ok, so when does the next installment come out? I think we'd all agree that it's been WAY too long already!!
I love the tension and build between nic and Des. Loving the characters and the flow of the story. can't wait for the next chapter!
you are great. fantastic work. i loved it. really. very good. very very very very good.
fantastic.
Please, Please, Please write the next chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. The sexual tension between Nic and Des is off the charts. Clearly you are one of the best writers on this site. Please write more!
Just wanted to let you know that I've read all three installments and loved all of them. The chemistry between the characters is so well detailed. Waiting anxiously for the rest of the story. Thank you!!!
Can't wait till the next installment, the first three chapters were marvelous. Great work. JV
Excellent! I hope the reason the story hasn't been updated and finished is because you're having it published. I really hope that's so because it makes me sad that I'll never get to read the ending. Such a wonderful story and so different from what I expected. Very original.
Please give your readers some closure by finishing the story. Or if it's being published give us that information.
you absolutely cannot leave this story hanging. i would be undoubtedly devastated, no lie.
I loved all your installments for this story. It's very good. I hope that you'll post an update soon.
It is very good and I makes me check back in every so often to see if there is any updates. I just wondering if i am wasting my time.
you write so beautifully. l'm loving this story. you can totally feel their tension.
The tangled feelings of love wrapped around lust for each other.
What a wonderful heart-burning/ warming story! Keep up the excellence!
I came across this series by pure happenstance, but I'm enjoying every minute of it. The story is well laid out, the pace perfect and not rushed, grammar and sentence structure the best I've seen on this site and the plot very unique. This is all my obnoxious way of saying great job and keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter and other stories.