All Comments on 'Fighting For Her Ch. 04'

Sometimes, When We Are Thinking That All Is Going

To Be Good - "BAM" - The Real Worl Do Life Slams Us

Back Down.

This Chapter 4 Was One Of Those "BAM's" That Life

Will Deal Up. It Is Shocking & Scarry - But It Also

Leaves Me Waiting To See What Happens Next.

Will Pam Become A Gang Member ? Will Amy Return &

Make Amends For Denying Her ?

Kathy

very powerful story you have here. just read all 4 chapters and im hoping for more! pam should have done so much more when she confronted amy rather than basically stare in shock. after all she had done for amy, saving her life, baring her heart and soul to her. i truly hope she meets her in the same circumstances she first met her in. karmas a bitch, and she doesnt care what your going thru when she gets your name on her list!

You sure know how to twist the knife. Great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks

i love the plot.the vivid descriptions of the setting and the characters are so good.please continue the story soön.the suspense is killing me.thank u 4 a wonderful read.

omg i need to know how the story continues!!! dont leave us hanging ... cant wait for the next installment!!

OMG!!!!! i need more. please update soon!!!!!!!!

Ouch, my heart :p That was amazing! I'm anxious for more!

This is amazing, please don't leave me hanging I NEED to know what happens next

Wow so suspenseful i really enjoyed reading it so please finish the story its killing me that I don't know what's going to happen next but I really did enjoy the story...so far;)

please, let us know how the story continues! <3

Are you gonna continue with the stories or what? These stories are very interesting and I think that you should continue on with the stories!

I commend your style of writing full of substance which makes your reader not just simply reading and enjoying but learnig as well....whilst you got us stike two already for waiting in vain and it hurts...it seems that we are not far from the character of your story hurting too.tsk..tsk..tsk//

I love your writing!!!! I'm really hoping that she doesn't join a gang though she fought so hard to stay away from that and what about her step father mike he would be heartbroken!!!! I know she's hurting more then she can handle but man I really hope she doesn't go into that gang!!!!

I love your writing!!!! I'm really hoping that she doesn't join a gang though she fought so hard to stay away from that and what about her step father mike he would be heartbroken!!!! I know she's hurting more then she can handle but man I really hope she doesn't go into that gang!!!!

Omggggg..... Plz finish the story , both are not finished I'm dying 2 know what happens

please continue the story this is such a great story

Aaaaah please just write on, i've been dying to know what will happen and asdfghjkl I NEED THIS STORY LIKE I NEED OXIGEN

Please write more ! I need to know what happen

More please!!!!

"This love this hate is burning me away" awesome story please keep going i want to know what happens next will pamela and amy end up together will it be a happy ending or a tragic one the part where amy denied pamela the first thing that came to mind was black dahlia from hollywood undead "i've been abused i feel so used because of you" please keep going i hope i get to read it before the new year

I love this story! Please keep writing, you have captured so many by it!

more please cant wait for the next chapter

Please write part 5

You are an incredible narritor i was littery 5 icnhers away from the computer reading this story.

please write a part 5.

This is amazing! I'm glad it was a bit longer this time. Please post more soon :)

Why don't you continue its really the greatest story i love it

Seriously this is such a great story. Please write more!!!!

I swear if you don't finish this series your gonna get some strongly worded letters from me

You're a heck of a storyteller but you are a fucking quitter.Why start these stories if you're not gonna finish them.You suck!!!

another incomplete story... good but now ruined

I read this over a year ago in hopes that you would add more to it by now. It is truly an awesome story. You did a Great job!!!

This story is too good to be ignored. The story line is intriguing so please please update.

If you have time, please finish the story. Thank you!

please finish this. its so good!

Where's the rest? I loved it so much Pls write more!!!!!!

What the point of starting a good story if you are not going to finish it?

Way to leave us hanging,very good story but a shame it doesn't get wrapped up. We are left sitting with our mouth agape. If you have time in the future please add more. Please and thank you.

I usually do not read storys word for word, but this one is written very good, cant wait for a 5th chapter keep writing this is good

Another great story left unfinished. Is this really the end?

IS THAT IT!?!?!?

when are you going to write part 5, this story is too good to leave it this way

I hope it continues! Well done!

I've been waiting for years. I really hope you finish this amazing story

Iv been waiting 5 years for the rest of the story! Please finish it

Great story...how about more, or an ending?

Such a great series. Has me wondering if it will ever be completed.

I think the answer is no, it wont be completed. Shame. This could've been so awesome. Another great story gone to waste.

Could've given Pam a happy ending after everything she's been through. You even started This We'll Defend after starting this. BTW This We'll Defend is one of my favourites. Seen as you dumped this story over others... and now gone for 8 years... You've soured my favourite. Pam deserves a happy ending!

That story has been so emotional up to this point. I would have never guessed the outcome of this chapter though, for what they had gone through seemed like a strong bond. They betrail took me of guard. Still I hope there is going to be a happy end coming, or at least some kind of closure. Whatever happens though, this story needs more chapters.

What a chicken writer, to bail leaving these characters (and us) swinging in the wind.

You were back writing for seven fucking years, and left them (and us) with nothing.

BTW, the story was actually good, up till you strangled it to death in apathy.

Why do writers put all the emotion and effort into a piece, and then cast it aside unfinished? What's the fucking point? I feel quite disrespected.