by boysetsfire
This is just as hot as the first episode, and I do hope that you give us a third to follow. Excellent story, well written and hot sex. More please.
Way to go. Can't wait to hear about Lucy moving to Kiwi land.
I never thought we'd see a sequel.
It was worth the wait.
Even better than the first.
Can we expect a trilogy?
You do a fantastic job making readers feel like we're really there.
Yes. Lucy IS a fucking hypocrite. It's that simple. How does Peter (or Becca) know that Lucy's husband's infidelity wasn't equally "cosmically ordained"? How? He doesn't/they don't. Lucy is a hypocritical asshole, plain and simple. Her husband is well rid of her. Good for him, I say, giving her a taste of her own medicine. Seems she disliked it.
Now I can finally read the rest. Sorry, but that pissed me off. Adultery is adultery. Even if the cosmos "ordains" it. I wonder if Peter would be so blase about it if the "cosmos ordained" that Becca (and maybe Lucy) was fated to fuck another man, passionately, decadently, whilst on vacation. I somehow doubt it.
-Anubelore