All Comments on 'Fill-in Housekeeper'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Yummy!

Very tasty story. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Interesting. And sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Clean up the grammar

Nice story; the lack of an editor took a lot out of the possible enjoyment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Too Abrupt

Definite lack of lead-in; needs editorial work, character development lacking.

plumberdonplumberdonabout 7 years ago
first time lesbian

must be nice to be set up by your husband

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More

Love the way this ended and want to read more

MariaG983MariaG983almost 5 years ago
I need Delores to clean my house!

Omg a fantasy come true. So hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If she's Latina it's Dolores not Delores. I doubt someone who is of Latin Heritage would choose Delores.

Yes it ruined the fantasy.

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