All Comments on 'Fill the Need In Me'

I have read a lot of stories and have written a few too. This is one of my favorites! It is hot and gritty without being cruel and I desperately wanted to be ravished right along with her!

So visually graphic with engaging plot!

Believeable?

In the writer’s profile he says “ . I write because I need erotica with good character development, where believable characters make believable decisions in believable situations”. None applies to this story, but it had a good build-up to some torrid sex. 4/5