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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
wow!

After this chapter I went back and re read chapter 1. Me thinks the pregnancy is going to be a major loophole and lawsuit against IC. I also see how Les Craig is dirty. BUT COULD THE KID BE CRAIGS? HIS EGO WOULD NOT LET HIM PASS UP A DAME LIKE BETTY. No honor among thieves.

Good story. Cannot wait for the next one.

Vincent_D_LeeVincent_D_Leealmost 7 years ago
A trap has been laid outraped, a commander falls, but a blow has been made

Jeebus, is Laura and the others gonna be ok with Don having a fifth or sixth baby Mama? Wait, is Don trying to spread HIS seed for his own Eugenics? Or is he just too lazy to use a condom? Only the Watchman knows.

So our local commander has finally outdone his back yet again but man, he needs to take a break at least in a while. Bus his sacrifice was not in vain, as he manages to catch the Criminal responsible in trying to assassinate his family and his back. But at the cost of being unable to partake in the upcoming Boxing Match, he has to let it go.

And apparently, despite being critical of an agent in the past chapter of not using a condom, he pretty did that mistake and will be a Baby Daddy again. But fellow readers, I've a theory, why is he trying to create many children as much as possible with many women? Because in his crusade, he will be dying soon, thus trying to have many children before he dies. Hopefully, his kids will be in harmony instead of being at each other throats when he's gone, is that a premise for a future arc? I can't say.

As to Craig, oh you Watchman, trying to make us figure out on our own, oh you. Well as one of the readers trying to decode. With his putting his head onto many cases of IC, very intrusive at that, that is one clue since it was very, VERY intrusive and meddlesome. Another one for this Chapter Noir, Craig was contacted by Morreli, (the husband) because what would be the best way to assassinate the Crowbar especially with that overblown performance of him "wondering" why Betty took the fifth. The Crowbar obviously saw through that. And with the many bugs planted on the car obviously by the agents when he was going to pick up Betty, it was definitely a set up so who had a better way to do this? Craig. Beyond that, is all I could, to decode.

So why is Don not bothering in using a Condom? Is Betty pregnant with his child? Will Don finally take some breaks, or will his back be the sacrifice? What will "Coffin" do now Morelli got his ass owned? Will the Watchman stop giving shit on small dicks? Argh, who am I kidding, this is Literotica, ignore the fifth question or answer it if you want to 😏? And finally dear readers, what clues did you manage to decode?

Well, Vincent out................................ until the next chapter of course. And take care of your back WifeWatchman, we definitely wouldn't want to lose you

grriz1grriz1almost 7 years ago
Enjoying the series

I do enjoy your writing style. Now that I'very caught up to your currant story, it now becomes a test of patients as I wait for the next chapter. I keep waiting for the chapter when Thomas Cook or Kathryn Woodard get theirsome.

Keep the chapters coming. I enjoy what you'very stareted.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 3 years ago

Russ Ferrament ? A character in another book by ..............?

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Loved the way this was written and the story itself. 5⛤

chytownchytown9 months ago

*****Thanks for the read.

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