All Comments on 'Fin and Travis'

Your writing was great. Very easy to read and nice to follow, I liked it. I think it left a little too much to the imagination and it seemed as if you were rushing through to get to the ending.

Good job though I liked it.

anonymous - but I dont read Harlequin books - my favorite authors are people like John Grisham/Wilbur Smith/James Minchner/Danielle Steele/Karen Robards/Sidney Sheldon and other popular writers - these stories are mostly fantasy except to the Group Therapy ones - and by the way - My son's name is Travis

I know from one of your comments you are interested in mother son love stories ,why not write one.I do wish that comments implying a story has been copied would at least leave some way of contacting them.

Jena; despite your contention that your stories are love stories-not lust stories, isn't it possible for them to be both? At any rate I thoroughly enjoy them and trust you will continue developing the incest theme. You do that so well.

Now that's not a nice way to finish a story so I trust there will be more.

Nothing could be worse than to have someone being sick after you have made love to them and for no reason.

Otherwise a very good story with more to follow I hope.