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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I may not be a literary critic, but I enjoyed this piece.

It almost had a plot which you don't see in even some of the good porn lit. I found that very pleasing.

The sex was done well including not bearing down on the daughters earlier "testing." I wonder if there is a rule about using "tasteful" as descriptive of this genre. If so, I am violating it. I thought that the sex was tastefully handled to great sensual effect.

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Lover of sex, I mostly write about what excites me. It's easier that way!

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