All Comments on 'Finally Found Ch. 01'

i really really like your storyline, i do love a good love story but i feel like this one is rushed. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Although it did feel rushed, it holds promise. Look forwarding to reading more of Cole and Jason!

You have a really good start. I really love both characters. More please.

This looks to be a good love story, will be keeping my eye out for more!

Just want to say, love it!! Can't wait for more!!

You are making a constant pressure on the money matter : expensive wine, free drinks in my house (Cole) etc, that is not very attractive. Cole appeares to be calculating and lazy (hate work). There is no conversation between the guys in the bar, just like average decent people do : speaking about sport, cars, music - anything, to become more comfortable with each other, no matter how horny they feel (after all, Cole and Jason are not teenagers!). It does not need to be long. They did not have that and suddenly they fell in love with each other? What a nonsence!

ok ya rushed a bit but i see where u r coming from. it is ur first story after all. and uh the asshole that totally dished ur story can go suck a pussy bcuz i thot it was touching. cole is not unattractive. just becuz he has expensive stuff and lets him have the most expensive wine doesnt mean he is unattractive! IT MEANS HE MAKES MONEY AND IS CONSIDERATE AND SWEET THAT HE LETS H9IM HAVE THE MOST EXPENSIVE WINE. I LOVED IT CANT WAIT FOR MORE

what puts me off is: when the guys tell I ''love you'' after one night stand!!! yeah- ''love'' !!! like hell it is! the real one! he-he-he...!

shitty story, bad plot, just boring

i loved it. another chapter soon? x :)

It was awesome story, please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that's real "love story", starts with => 1).bar pick up for one night stand;

2).thinking how much money costs the man and therefore trying to get the most expensive wine;

3).shameless lies - instead the truth (or at least silence: everyone knows, if you do not want to be caught lying - keep your mouth shut)

4).and after all above - here comes - "i love you"

your story did not even get that *red letter H* - does it tell you anything?

I think that you shouldnt let some of the comments get you down there are some people that did enjoy it. i think it is a good start maybe you could add a little to this first chapter to fill it up with character, maybe slow it down a little. But keep writing :) i look forward to reading more of your stuff if you keep going

You are a very good writer and i love this story!

Plz finish this plz it's so good