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Click here"What!?" He screamed it in my face and it jolted me back a little, "What do you want? You want to know what happened. I was standing in the mall that blew up about a year ago a few towns over and I had a lot of third degree burns. Are you satisfied now? Can I leave?"
"No!" I was surprised at my tone, but I was pissed, "You can't just assume that just because you have those scars that I won't care about you! Those marks don't make who you are! You're still beautiful to me and I'm pretty sure I love you so, no, you can't leave!" I couldn't believe what I had just said to him, and I don't think he could either because he got a really confused and sad look in his eyes and threw himself in my arms. I just held him there and stroked his back, and about ten minutes later he looked at me,
"You love me?"
"Yes."
"How?"
"Because you are so sweet and I have this gut twisting feeling every time I see you and I care so much about you even though I just met you and I know it's soon but I love you, I just know I do."
"I love you to."
I smiled at him and picked him up; he was surprised but rested his head on my shoulder while I took him to the living room. I laid him on the couch and went into the kitchen to get some medicine for the killer headache I had from hitting my head. I came back in the living room and he was looking at me so intently that I just had to go over there and give him a big kiss. When I bent down to kiss him, he grabbed the back of my head and held me there. We kissed for some time but I started to get uncomfortable from leaning over and stood up.
"I'm not a virgin."
I was shocked, "What?"
"I'm not a virgin; I just had to tell you that so you wouldn't want me to take my clothes off."
Now I understood. I leaned down and gave him a quick kiss on the forehead and smiled.
TO BE CONTINUED
- COMMENTS
midnighter432over 13 years agoI think that you shouldnt let some of the comments get you down there are some people that did enjoy it. i think it is a good start maybe you could add a little to this first chapter to fill it up with character, maybe slow it down a little. But keep writing :) i look forward to reading more of your stuff if you keep going
Anonymousover 13 years agothat's real "love story", starts with => 1).bar pick up for one night stand;
2).thinking how much money costs the man and therefore trying to get the most expensive wine;
3).shameless lies - instead the truth (or at least silence: everyone knows, if you do not want to be caught lying - keep your mouth shut)
4).and after all above - here comes - "i love you"
your story did not even get that *red letter H* - does it tell you anything?
