All Comments on 'Finally in the Red Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
As was observed earlier, imagine this is a guy telling his wife to go to another man's room to play around.

Erotic now? If yes, pleas mark the box next to Stupid Cuckold on your ID card. A pathetic wife who is playing with fire, or setting her husband up with her friend so she can start (continue?) to fuck whomever she pleases. Yeah, who doesn't want to start fucking around after 5 long tedious years of marriage. Obviously not much of a marriage. This marriage is headed into the crapper, regardless of how it is written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Time saved

Once again I saw the Dear Annony addresser ID in remarks and as It always likes stories I wont I gave it a One without reading Keep up the work!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
No wife no score

except for the 1* that I gave it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Forget the content or subject matter

This wasn't well written. It certainly contained nothing original. The writing wasn't clever or the dialogue witty. Nothing sexy or erotic. Lacking any likeable characters, this mess just wasn't fun or entertaining to read, regardless of who was doing what to whom.

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