by Beloved_Bird
Nice story but Very fast paced, would have liked to see it develop more, find out what is wrong with Amy, more about Brendan and his character, how the relationship develops,me hat happens after college, etc...
you really raced through it. Would've been nice to see some development in the story.
Way too fast! Would have loved to see it developed. Now its too late.
I agree that it would have been nice to see the guys developed more as characters. Take us along on the dates, have them talk on the phone and let us get to know them. for a short it was a nice HEA story.
Nice story line, good couple but totally lacking in character development. Also having Eric who is a self described twink become the top was rather not believable.