All Comments on 'Finding a Jewel'

I thought that your story was well written and evenly paced

and kept my interest. I give it five palms up!

This was an absolutely awesome story. One of the best I've read on this site in quite some time. You have a great writing style, please contribute more.

Well done.

Nice story, well constructed if it did not start a tad early, but who's complaining. Next chapter please? :) Can't wait!

Honestly, you had me caring more for the characters than the actual sex. Would have loved to see more ending after that climax but it was still an amazing story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I think this is one of the absolute best I've read. Quite amazing. Tantalizing details, with voice and characterization. What more could a reader want? Please, post more. :)

I wish I were her...never cum so hard from a story in my life. More please?

Tediously written. Two pages too long.

Long, yes. Hot? Holy Hell, YES!

kinda, weird in terms of writing, comes off as a jackass