All Comments on 'Finding Comfort Ch. 01'

by RustedBeef

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A great start

Not bad; not bad at all. Be interesting to see how you develop this, particularly the emotional side of their relationship - you being a man and all.

SwifthawkSwifthawkalmost 11 years ago
I'm a sucker

for end of the world type stories. Great start and I'm looking forward to see how this all plays out! Thanks for sharing!

RustedBeefRustedBeefalmost 11 years agoAuthor
To Anon

Yeah, I think me being male and writing about a lesbian relationship is one of the more difficult things when writing this. I read a few other lesbian stories and even some guides on Lit so I could make the story believable, but I'm pretty sure I still could improve. Let me know if you've got any advice, will ya?

Glad you liked the chapter, by the way. Thanks for reading.

biercebiercealmost 11 years ago
Good start

Love the premise. Two ships in the night. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Continue!

I found this story very unique and enjoyed the chemistry between both characters. Great writing, can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Keep writing <3 add some danger and romance. Great so far. :)

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