by Nellskitchen
Very nicely written. It's good to see some depth and reality here on lit. You made me take pause and think...
"Digby"
I have been accused of being more experienced and knowledgeable about sex & Life than my now 20 yrs would indicate. 1st of all allow me to justify that wisdom. I 1st became a horny, sex addict, tease at the early age of 11 y o. Not realizing my vulnerability I also became the target for rape. I felt the rape turned me into a woman @ the age of 11 regardless of what the Supreme Court says. I felt no restraints regarding pornography, masturbation, or becuming more of a cock tease. English was my best subject, altho I was never an "A" student in anything butt sports. I am now going to college. Now having just turned 20, I am no longer a teenager anymore also.
I have enjoyed reading Literotica for yrs & yrs (I am looking forward to writing for literotica when I get a chance). When I 1st started reading Literotica it was nothing butt cheap, pornographic, dirty, repetitive descriptions of cock sucking & fucking ass holes. - - Nell has crossed the line - - She has turned Pornography & Literotica into Classical Literature!
Love & Kisses to all of my Friends,
Betty18
Be Naughty
This story is wildly successful in two ways.
Your writing style flows well, and is technically superior. I love the way you utilize many different literary devices (a rare jewel on this site). The image of a mermaid was absolutely enchanting. Clearly, you have a gift for holding someone’s attention, not because of salacious material, but due to your command of the written word.
Further, the subject matter was also notable. Erin’s story serves as a great vehicle to reveal your own natural curiosity and fascination with certain aspects of sexuality.
I can’t imagine anyone read this story without thinking back to their own first experience. Peeling back the layers, as you did with Erin, is a great exercise in self-discovery.
S
wonderful...superb writing, well beyond lit entries. reread it, and found new gems. very grateful old guy.