by Lacessor
Wow what I would do for a woman like Dani. This is a beautiful story , please write more like this
It wasn't a "sexy" story exactly, but it felt so real, which really made it hot, if that makes sense.
You did a very good job.. your approach was beautiful and I loved it.. I really see myself as Gabe and would love
Y girlfriend like Dani.. oh yes
I really loved this story. Hopefully you will find a way to add another chapter and include going clothes shopping, buying lingerie (the sales girls can be soooo helpful), wearing dresses and miniskirts, etc.
And very tenderly treated. This was an excellent, well-written story, for which my thanks -- and five big shiny stars.
I like your writing. This was interesting with good characters and good flow.
Impressive how perfectly you explored sexual identity and gender issues in such an accurate and nicely written manner. You write really, really well! This was smartly written and incredibly enjoyable. Pretty damned sexy as well. I'm looking forward to more of your stories. This one is a 5 star effort.