by Ghostwind
It was well written. The story line put together wonderfully, no volgarness. Made me wish to be either of the participants. Best wishes to a story well done!
So well written, all father/daughter should be so lucky. Please continue, perhaps make it generational.
This writer is a master of the language. Thank you for a fine story which the language makes a pleasure to read.
Almost appeared as a true story. Well written. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Loved it, very well written and I particularly enjoyed the ending ;)
There must have been no "irregularities" with the kids. They better make sure that there are no dalliances between the children though.
Where are you now?
Many an exiting tale, all top notch!
How I enjoyed your tellings, please return and lighten up our days, and lonely nights...
Made me explode a lot. Father-daughter fantasy incest stories are the best, specially when the daughter gets impregnated by daddy.