by Scot1234
Stylish and sexy and so believable with your writing.
This needs further development.
one of the best father-daughter stories I've read, the only thing that would have made it better would have been a trace of blood from her broken cherry because the story already made her seem like a virgin
NEEDS a part 2
continue until prego
I hope there a chapter two!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent
Hoping you decide to continue it! Still great!
Was a perfect story