All Comments on 'Finding Himself in Her Ch. 04'

by Mr_Owlow

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rdoolittlerdoolittlealmost 12 years ago
Happy ending nice

I hope you have another story with a stronger femdom theme in you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Continue the story

Chapter 5 should be about Jaime's decision to stay feminine, take some female hormones to help him grow some boobs, and then get the augmented to the C cup size. He should not get the sex-change though, since Kara loves his cock.

One question though, when is Jaime going to invade Kara's ass with more than his tongue?

subVAguysubVAguyover 11 years ago
Hopefully this isn't the end....

This was a great chapter and a surprise "reveal" to Jaime's dad. I can't wait to read subsequent chapters. This is a fantastic, well written story.

Mr_OwlowMr_Owlowover 11 years agoAuthor
It is not the end

I'm planning at least two more chapters but I have a lot of other stuff going on so it will take a while... I'm writing some regular fiction, studying and am trying to find work so this stuff is on the back burner for now.

subVAguysubVAguyover 11 years ago
Can't wait to have Jaime introduce herself to her boss, Melissa....

It will definitely be interesting to read Jaime's reveal to her boss, Melissa, and see if she is "on board" with it. You are a excellent writer and I've enjoyed reading this story and others of yours as well.

Sandie8222Sandie8222over 11 years ago
Excellent series

I have enjoyed the series, so far, please going with Chapter 5 and beyond. It shows how some people can find happiness, by looking into their inter self and doing some about it. Great job with all your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great start!

I enjoy the story/plot so far, and I like the slower pace (so many take it from 0 to 100 mph in one step).

One minor note trough is pronounced troff while through is pronounced thru.

Great story, keep it going.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 8 years ago
Sweet and sentimental - I loved it!

Very nice change of the pacing to allow Jaime to catch up with the part of herself left behind and reconcile it with her new future. I enjoyed the break in slam-bang action sex to allow Jamie's emotional changes to catch up with her physical changes. I can easily relate.

Hugs & Kisses, Di

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic, the best I've read so far.

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