All Comments on 'Finding Home Ch. 06'

by Xantu

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Invisible2uInvisible2uover 16 years ago
Hmmm...

I can't decide whether or not I think the Master will be happy with her change. And what would he think about the crush that Cassy seems to be developing for The Professor?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wickedly amazing shiz!!!

This was so wickedly amazing! I loved it, when will there be more??? I desperately wanna know what happens between Cassy and the professor, or Cassy and her Master!

notmichellenotmichelleabout 13 years ago

Great chapter. So happy that Cassy is making progress. I love the way you are tying up loose ends of the story and it is coming together so well.

Andromeda7Andromeda7almost 13 years ago

Totaly different BDSM, excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Perhaps more people would have a better life with unconventional therapy like this instead of conventional. I know I would like to meet a doctor like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It just seems so fast

This is chapter 6; Cassy has been in in-patient therapy for less than one week. I'm sorry, but it is unbelievable that she is 1) out of her dissociative state, 2) remembers much of her early childhood, including the reason her brother was killed and that her mother was the murderer; 3) is able to read the gory details and only mildly strike out; and 4) too many other things to list in this limited space. I don't care how unconventional the Professor is, nothing involving a mind or psyche is resolved that fast.

That said, I am enjoying the story--albeit with lots of grains of salt! You write well but need a proofreader desperately. --- shemar

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Brad

How does she change from a victim to a brad in one page? And why is it ok for her to be in an abusive relationship? Her “dom” treats her just like her mother and the professor is ok with that? Weird

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