All Comments on 'Finding Love at Midnight'

by chris_2010

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I don't like the trashy language. Otherwise it was a great stury.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh, it was COMPLETELY believable

A young woman meets a crying teenage boy, and immediately decides to bring him home and fuck him senseless.

This sorta shit happens to me every week!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Bored

I got bored,

read better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The dialogue!

The dialogue was particularly pathetic. It was the cheesiest thing since amateur porn. Also, don't you think this went by way too fast If you had maybe developed the story a bit more, it would be worth reading.

JLoveMJLoveMover 8 years ago
So beautiful

So beautiful ♥

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