All Comments on 'Finding Love Ch. 04'

great chapter but the next one is going to be interesting when ivy sees kern the shit is going to hit the fan

excellent work can not wait for the next chapter

oh...mean cliffhanger! lookin forward to more.

Btw what is up with ur love of lowes? Rona not good enough? Lol. Good story so far, have u ever thouht of putting up a blog so ur stories and updates are posted up faster? Hope u update soon, looking forward to the next chapter! Don't keep us hanging!

I just love this story. Cant wait to find out what happens next.

I hate cliffhangers and I so want to find out what happens net.

Lol, I had to re read from chapter 1 coz you left me feeling unfulfilled. I'm like shit! Better retract and see if I can predict what's gonna happen next!

But as always, write when you can and I look forward to your next chapter!

You had to leave it that way?????????? Damn it, it was really getting good and you stopped....Please post the next one soon!!!!!!!

Boy, Durablue, you sure know how to leave us hanging--and keep us coming back for more!! I didn't see this ending coming, and that's just one more mark of an excellent writer. Keep it up; you've got a great story going, here!!

I love your story line and can't wait for more... fingers crossed it won't be too long!!

Ohhhh man if that just throw a monkey wrench into this thing lol! Oh if one is there then the other should be around there also. Cant wait to see if there is a meeting in one of those isles! great great chp

There is going to be a throw down at the local Lowes... lol

I can't wait to read how you will introduce new lovers and heal old wounds.

Great stuff!

You're back! And this chapter was wonderful; I can't wait to see how this plays out

holland and his sisters = adorable relationship between them. daylon in the shop = priceless ....

the plot thickening, could it get any thicker? I hope in the end Kern will choose his mate over the fear his father has over him, but watching him get there is going to be a fun ride. And just how evil do you plan on letting the worthless piece of shit father get.

This is such a great storyline and I like most wish it posted more often. Maybe once the mighty Miss. River gets back w/i her banks you might be able to give us future chapters at a faster pace? Ok at least think about it, your cliffhangers are painful!

Well damn talk about a cliffhanger from hell!

I see bad things to come, hoping that Dolmas is not in Lowes as well.

My spidey sences were tingling haha But I loved it and you need to post it asap cause my sanity may not last!!!

This story is wonderful and I hope that more chpts will be out soon and I love the twist about the twins the story is just getting so much more spicy!!!

This story is wonderful and I hope that more chpts will be out soon and I love the twist about the twins the story is just getting so much more spicy!!!

please post next chapter faster - I am loving this story and you know I am a big fan of yours - once a month is not enough - once a week would be so much better - :) - hugs to you

Now that's an interesting twist. I wonder if Caleb and Tara might match up? Keep writing!

One of the best story series I've ever read! Can you please continue the story... Such a cliff hanger.

I bet Caleb & Tara hook up as well and the brothers will either find sanctuary with the Wolfland Pack, or Surlak will banish Dolmas.

Love the story! pls hurry with the nexted chapter!

I cant wait to see where this goes from here .. I cant wait to read more ...

I'm dying to see how this plays out...I keep checking back to make sure you didn't sneak the next chapter in... hoping to see a new chapter soon :)

Hey everyone... I sent chapter 5 to my editor today. It shouldn't be much longer.

Dura Blue

i just wanna say first i wish daylon could teach my son's father how to treat a woman...LOL...he seriously needs lessons and i hope for his next partner's sake he learns something between now and then...

anyhoo, love this story! can't wait for the next sequels to come...

i really laughed out loud reading holland's interaction with his sisters...soooo funny...

Ch 5 has been submitted. It should post in three days. Thank you for the comments, everyone!

Dura Blue

OMG....you only have to finish this i want to kno how holland is going to react when he finds out who his sisters mate is he going to go so craziii....i love this series....you have to finish oh plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love how jade was turned on by ivys brother!!!!:) I wonder how daylon ,ivy,Mary,holland,and everyone else will react to that!!!! Ahhh I can't wait til the next ch.!!!!!! I wonder if jade won't go out or whatever they do with him once she knows who he iz

How many more days am I gonna be forced to wait durablue!!! I'm going nuts here! =^_^= PK

One good thing about playing catch up is I get to read multi chapters LOL

I freakin adore you characterisation. It's so well done, the way each person interacts realistically in a family environment (well Holland's family anyway LOL). His sisters' teasing him and his reaction was just priceless and had me laughing out loud. I could feel his mortification hahahaha!

I sort of guessed what was going to happen at Lowes when they were all heading there at the same time. I'm still in the kill em all mentality for Ivy's brothers but maybe, just maybe they can be redeemed and I'll change my mind.

Brilliant chapter!

Dun dun...DUNNNNNNNN

no no no no no!!!!! it can't happennnn it just CAN'T. but probably will anyway... :/

it's about to hit the fan

GREAT story

Uh Oh!

I love this series!

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saw that one coming, lucky for me i dont have to wait to find out what happens next

I actually expected it to be the dad, but damn!

I'm glad that Ivy's brothers aren't going to wind up dead, although I still can't quite bring myself to feel sorry for them. It's complex. Regardless, I think being mated to strong women will be good for them in many ways. ^^

I totally saw this coming a few miles away. How much you wanna bet Caleb ends up with Tara and/or the brothers warn Daylon about their father... and more... Love this story.

But how old is D really? Chapter one said he just turned thirty, then in another chapter he said he was 27.

Oh well, love him anyway.

For Jade's sake, I do hope Kern is trainable...

Oh THIS should be interesting.

Whoa!!!! Twist!!!!! Luv It!!!! XD

I went from one to reading just had 2 keep on reading

Touching...very warm and touching! <3

hope the kern guy does not Play fool games with her. great teasing between the sisters and Holland btw.:)

I'm absolutely loving the banter between all of them.

Also kinda hoping both her brothers find their mate is his sisters. If anyone can put those boys in their place, it's those sisters.