All Comments on 'Finding Love Pt. 01'

I didn't know if you could match the beautiful love story that was "Hidden Desires", you set the bar that high. If this first chapter is an indication we're in for more well written erotica. You've become one of the most sensuous and romantic authors contributing here. More please!!!

I love the kind of stories that makes my heart throb while reading. And you're one of the authors who is capable of that. Very sensual story, and I love the innocence element, too! Ecstatic to see what's in store for the next chapters. Amazing job, as ever! :D

More soon please. Glad to find another story with substance. There are too few. Please continue :-) ,Beth.

You have a fabulous talent for weaving an interesting, emotional story around sexy & lovable characters. Well done yet again. Love this first chapter and hope to read more of their story soon!

I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see what's next, I would love to see Kate do something to Zoe for the way she took advantage of Ari. Hope it won't be to long for the next part.

What a wonderful, touching, romantic read this was and I can't wait for more. It's so great that we are once again getting some well written, romantic lesbian stories on Lit. and this one is just beautiful.

Thank you for sharing your talents with us, and please keep up the good work.

Doc

Please write chapter 2

WOW! The praise is pouring in ... as it should!! A very strong first chapter in what looks to be an interesting romantic tale with believable, likeable characters.

Congratulations on another fine effort. It's always a pleasure to read stories with a point other than a mad dash to the bedroom.

Kudos Dru_Druthers!! Well done indeed!!

Great first chapter. I was slightly surprised at how fast things ramped up between Kate and Ari as I was expecting more of a slow burn like there was between Jade and Terri in Hidden Desires based on the initial teasing with Meg. Really looking forward to watching this one play out.

As always, thanks for sharing your words.

I work as a telephone relay agent for Voice Carry Over (VCO) people who have lost their hearing but are able to speak. I jumped through this story very rapidly to save it on my own computer and to leave my comments on it. It's the second story I've read with a deaf protagonist (the other was actually a series of stories) and the first with a VCO person in the leading role. I stopped long enough to see the character going to bed alone and thinking how lonely she must feel. I don't know if this is the start of a one woman-one woman romance story or if the other characters will keep her company in future chapters, but I hope it is a happy story for her and for the people who love her. Really nicely done!

I love all your stories and have re-read Hidden Desires more than a dozen times. This one is promising to be on par with the rest. I just had one question. I noticed that Jade showed up. Is this before or after she married Terri?

Please finish this story. And, in truth, I hope that Jade and Terri show up again. I think it would be fun.

Cheers.

Please write ch2

A great first chapter. Usually 5's wait for the end, but that was just flat well done. Just don't keep us waiting for the rest. Thank you

I am partially deaf -but from birth. On top of that I'm left-handed! You capture that "stranger in a strange land" feeling very well! Can't wait to find out what happens!

I hope this doesn't take too long in between chapters. Definitely looking forward to more!

Gorgeous story Dru, eagerly awaiting part 2!

Cat x

so excited to see your new story come up. it is very enjoyable. i hope to see more chapters following soon. this story has many wonderful elements and good characters that are well developed. thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Beautifully set up, marvelous writing, excellent story with many possibilities. We're all waiting to find out where you will take us next.

I loved it when Megan told Kate “that men looked at her without reservation so why should Kate have to apologize for it.”

Oh boy when Kate had her HOT one nighter with Vivian… that was yummy. :)

I loved how protective Kate was of Ari when Zoe cornered her. Then Kate did everything she could to comfort Ari. It truly felt like she was trying to comfort her and not just get her into bed.

I loved it and can’t wait for Chapter 2!

Kate's intervention on behalf of Ari reminds me of a story I heard recently, a true one. Ari is a caring, loving woman who doesn't get the love she has earned so much because she is giving so much. I know a real woman like that. Good for Kate! Hope she finds fulfillment.

Another beautifully written story. You have yet again managed to capture your readers' attention, and with such skill.

The overlapping of characters from one story to the next is a delightful surprise. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. Thanks for sharing.

I love your story and especially your style of writing and storytelling. Look forward to seeing much more.

What a wonderful beginning. I hope this story goes on an on. Thanks for sharing.

I know that you don't like blokes,but I hope you don't mind blokes saying good things about your stories.I'd not seen your work before,and it is simply wonderful-I'm no literary genius,but this story really got to me,and I can't wait to read more of your work.Congratulations!

Lindsay.

I really wanted to like this story, it has a lot of potential. Sadly I got bored and disinterested and had to stop by page 2.

The story is too passive and has too much tell and not enough show. You can do better, you're a good writer from what I've seen. Don't get in a rush to reach the good parts - make each and every part a good part.

Dru, I want to join with rover & mg & scarlet and the other favorable commentators who are enjoying your writing. As for the anonymousie proceeding me, you just can't please everybody but first you gotta please yourself.

I like your deliberate style of building depth to your characters. I will certainly continue perusing this storyline as time and commitments permit me.

The only problem with coming to a story after it is complete is reading the descriptions of future parts!

It looks like there will at least be bumps in the road ahead, if not running off the road altogether.

Here's hoping for a happy ending for two people who deserve it!

This was one of the first stories i read when i stumbled upon Literotica a few months back. It was never my intention to vote or comment on anything as all i wanted was to read. (yeah i have grown, so now i can vote and comment with honest enthusiasm) I AM IMPRESSED NOW AS I WAS BACK THEN..... * LOVING IT! *

Loving this already, a long way to go!

Nice to see Jade from "Hidden Desires" back, hopefully we'll see Terry, too?

You are the first writer here that I really got hooked on.

Was totally blown away by "Hidden Desires", was honestly not overly impressed with the two shorter stories, but looks like you hit another home run here!

I;m also a little nervous reading some of the descriptions of the rest of the chapters, but I have faith that you will make the journey worthwhile!

It's always a pleasure to find and enjoy a well-written story with a good, strong plot line. I've given you five stars for this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the subsequent chapters and also "Hidden Desires" which so many others have commented on.

That said, Dru, I hope you won't mind me correcting what is a very common grammatical error in the early part of your story (an error which once, to my disgust, I saw in a headline in a national newspaper): son-in-laws/daughter-in-laws is incorrect---it should be sons-in-law/daughters-in-law.

Your writing is wonderful and this is a great story!

Thank you!

L

Wow😍 can't get enough I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter.

5🌟's

Finding this story IS like Finding Love. The love of erotica. I was just perusing the Lesbian Hall of Fame section to find a story I hadn't read and BAM!#* there it was. I find myself not wanting to put the story down even tho it's almost 1:00 in the morning and I have to be at work in a few hours. Well, I'm going to see if I can get thru chapter 2 before I pass out. Lol - Dru Druther, good job. Thank you for sharing your gift

What a great first chapter and I'm so excited that there's eight more to read.

That was super hot. It's well written and edited. It was virtually typo free and coherent. I think you did a great job in telling the story and the characters are wonderful. Thank you

Awww so cute