All Comments on 'Finding Meridian Ch. 20'

So many things happening, it was crazy! lol. Cyrus was their father?? wow. I never saw that coming. I have been waiting for this chapter for so long haha. Im so glad to see that you posted it.

But i need to make a little comment... slow it down. Yes this chapter was really good and it did have so many things going on.... but maybe a little bit too much. At some parts it seemed rushed.

seems I have been waiting forever for another chapter. I can not wait for the next one. Please hurry with it - pretty please

as this story has come along it has become over the top. i really enjoyed your story and the plot is good and everything but i think that u try to fit too much into the story sometimes that the initial story has run away on u. it just seems too over the top to me. but i still like it. if that made any sensee

I'm feel happy that you decided to update. Post the next chapter soon!

Is everything so perfect. I love the plot. But there is a lot of unneccessary dialogue. As though you are answering questions prematurely