by Meridian13
I was so excited about seeing the next chapter....Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!
this chapter was a way more easier to follow than the last. There where a few grammar errors and misplacing of names. but not enough to throw the story off. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas
I thought you had decided not to write anymore. I am so glad that I was wrong. Please continue with the story as it is such a good one. I will continue to check daily for the next chapters.
That was a fantastic chapter. This story just keeps getting better and better.
just read from the start it one night and now a cannot wait for more, alice and reardan look like a good extension of the story, as does conner and blue, hope to see more soon, the characters are great and funny and you write at times like in such a manner that i crack up laughing at how funny a passage in the story is, keep it up it great
Cant wait for the rest of the story, so please oh please don't leave us hanging. Would also like to hear more about the girls daddy, how he was changed so on so forth.
starangel
I just finished some major life transitions including a huge move. I plan to be settled in the next week and the next chapter should come pretty quickly, it is started. Appreciate the following! I just could not give you something subpar.
I have really enjoyed reading your story. I hope that you will continue writing about the other births. Like someone else commented previously, I would also enjoy reading more about Conner, Alice, Reardon, etc. Please post soon!
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I just read the whole story to this point and really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more.
On. Just finished the story took me 3 days to read but it was worth it. Thank you. Can't wait till the next chapter. Hope your move went well.
Cheers
I love this story and it's twists and turns.
Hope to see the next chapter in December, but please get well first.