All Comments on 'Finding My F-Stop, and More'

Very hot and very well written. Great way to start the morning.

Story was great and had a lot of potential. Failed to describe Kathy and Anna better. Never had a good picture of either of them. Lost me when they went to bed in a threesome and their clothes were gone. Such a long time building up to a great ending and then falling flat.

story, does it go one ? a little more with Jake and his pal, pictures of her with other guys ?

keep on writing

i loved it

you should definitly do more with this story line....

A great, plausible idea to start, well written, but seems unfinished, and, yes; it could have used more development of the women.

... and yes, the sex was suitably hot, though I kept hoping for more details. I'll admit I grew concerned when the narrator said how "hazy" the following few hours in each of her sessions had been. I was worried the details would also be fuzzy and not well-defined, but you provided us with a good level of description.

That said, I'm with the others: I'd like to see more character development. I didn't totally buy into the narrator's quick acceptance of the nude photo sessions. She seemed a little reluctant at first but shed those inhibitions so quickly that I wasn't quite prepared for her to strip before a stranger.

I'll still look forward to your other work, though. Good job!

An excellently written story of pure non-stop sex. You probably won't find too many ladies this horny, but if there are, let this author tell us about her!

Would have loved to have had the men come inside the women's asses!

Great story but what an amazingly rushed and disappointing end.

Completely ruined the whole thing.

2 Stars from me.