All Comments on 'Finding my Place'

will you continue this story would like to see if Olivia will help him get together with Katie

awesome -- very awesome

i hope you continue with it. she continues to help him gain confidence, he gets the girl that's been blowing him off, he does his mom who's been neglecting him. lots of potential

well written very erotic more please ill be reading it again

I'd love to read more about Shaun & Olivia/Mrs. Alexander. Will she help him with Katie? Anyway, thanks for sharing.

Thanks everyone for your comments and votes. I appreciate the feedback and encouragement. Chapter 2 is pending and Ch. 3 is being written - I hope they can continue to arouse your interest!

Thank you for a great story. Very descriptive in the sex scene. Was this what happened with your first woman? Made me see it in my minds eye something that does not often happen to me. I will now have to read the other parts of this story. I also enjoy your postings of middle East women. I traveled around the world for the government in the 1980's but did not get to middle East there were a lot of plane hijacking etc at the time. Never set foot on any part of Africa. Again THANK YOU

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