All Comments on 'Finding Myself and My Best Friend Ch. 02'

Still too wordy.

I love a romantic story, so this one pushes my buttons but I am especially enjoying the dialogue and the sense of place that this story has. The characters seem real in the way they speak and the emotions are genuine. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I fucking loved it. Obvious chemistry expressed in golden words. Can't wait until part three.

Hi guys, thanks for the feedback, always appreciated.

Still working on Chapter 3, and i'm hoping it'll be up within the next couple of days or so :)

Paul x

Loving it so far. I love how realistic your story telling is. I feel like you're sitting across from me telling it. Very authentic. Can't wait for more

But too much repetition. The "man" and "dude" were used so often it took me out of the story. It was HOT and I'm curious about whether this will be a HEA or a nostalgia piece. Can't wait to find out.

I like to real stories based on real life experiences. It really feels like it. The way your story has progressed do far is good. I want to hear more of how your relationship develops. And it has a happy ending.

Loved this, feels very real (if slightly unnerving because I also went to Glasgow uni avdecade later!)