by MaliciousMelly
Loving this story! So sweet and romantic! My only criticism would be that you have quite a few grammatical mistakes - but an editor would fix that no problem. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I have been waiting for the next segment of this Great Story for over 4 months. It was worth the wait... I could not be happier with the longer, Awesome Ch. 6. Hope you won't keep us all waiting for so long... Very well done... *****
This seems like only the start of the story. So wish there was a follow-up about how these two have evolved their living relationship. Luke seemed to know of their mutual attraction and even orchestrated things to bring them together. Would love to hear more from these wonderful characters.