All Comments on 'Finding the One Ch. 07'

A very nice chapter. It seems that at last Marc and Melissa have completely connected. I hope the next chapter confirms this connection and provides a happy ending to the story.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Thanks. I don't want to spoil anything but I'm quite sure you'll like the, rather short!, ending in Ch.08 better than the one in 'The Monster Within' ;)

And worked as a short chapter this time as got to the main part of the chapter very quickly.

Looking forward to the last part.

As I've said before you're a great writer and look forward to reading more of your work.

For a nice finish in the final furlong.

now I've completely forgotten about the neurotic BS bitchiness in the club. If she's that stuck on him and that enthusiastic in bed she can damn sure go neurotic bitch once in awhile.

Loved the wait and the build up during two weeks of rehab.

5 *

Not sure if this is a real story about commitment phobia or just a story about sex. I like the commitment angle much better.