All Comments on 'Fine Line Ch. 02'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hot Chapter!

Guy is turned on by watching a girl running as sprinklers come on. Instead of running to get away she stands there enjoying the wetness. Vivid erotic images help this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Exquisite

Thus far, two chapters in, it is a beautiful game of cat and mouse centered around a wantonly wonderful subject - that sometimes, our bodies know better than our minds what we really, truly want. An excellent contribution to the archives that I will gladly re-read over and over.

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