All Comments on 'Fine Print'

very good, i had a grat time reading your story

keep on writing more!!!!!

This is where fantasy wants to meet reality, just think if this could really happen, yes please.

Another great erotic story

Definately written by a guy. Written with a rushed mind. Not relaxed. Author needs to watch hjs breathing and not let the mind get caught up in the story.I appreciate the effort. C+

I should have known not to read this when I saw that 4 of 6 stories by this author were transsexual.

Worse yet, it's a "happy victim" story. It's just a way to pretend the perpetrator is less of a monster. Someone likes to be whipped and they request it, great. Someone wants to change gender and they work to achieve it, great.

Coercion, trickery, blackmail and arguably even bribery is awful. A story that features those things and lacks justice is awful as well. Life is unfair. Entertainment should be better.

another gender switch . this is not sci fi you should put it in Transsexuals & Crossdressers

Trite and predictable. There should be some reluctance and resistance to the treatments. Some type of conflict would make it far better.